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- ✍️DraftedMonday, July 6, 2026 at 6:11 PM
- ✓Approved by clientTuesday, July 7, 2026 at 8:40 PM
Feedback that lands as a verdict
Most feedback fails for one reason. It arrives as a verdict on who someone is, instead of a direction toward what they could do next. You tell someone their work missed the mark, and they hear "I'm not good enough" instead of "this piece of work wasn't good enough." What landed was a judgment about their competence, and now they're defending themselves instead of adjusting the work. This isn't because your people are fragile. It's because most feedback is built backward. It points at the past, names the failure, and stops there, closing a door it was supposed to open. The leaders who actually change behavior do the opposite. They make feedback about the next attempt, not the last one. Same honesty about what went wrong, but aimed forward: name what happened, name what it cost, then name what you need to see next time and why. That small shift changes everything. A verdict causes a defensive response that makes people feel the need to protect themselves. Giving someone direction encourages them to move forward. If your feedback is technically accurate but nothing changes after you give it, it's fair to look introspectively at how your feedback landed. When you give feedback, are you closing the door on the last attempt or opening the door for the next required action?
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